young people who play violent video games for a short period of time, increasing their violent behaviour following the game.One study showed how the participants playing with this kind of game for at least 10 minutes, saw themselves experienced aggressive behavior and violent actions immediately after playing.
Recently many family associations and political figures have denounced these games as the most violent and have even asked his ban.
children who are fans of martial arts video games often rehearse their "apprenticeships" with their own friends and teachers find that students who are having fun with them are more aggressive than others.
They often have the tendency to imitate the gestures that actually learn from their characters on the screen
2 comments:
I thik that you would use a new connectors for you will be able to organize and give coerence your composition, you should use:
TIME AND SEQUENCE: Next,then, finally, first, second, in the mantime.
ADDING: In addition, on the orther hand, in the spite of.
EXAMPLE: For instance, an example of this, in other words.
Dear Deisi, this opinion essay is interesting and follows the model provided but there are some mistakes. For example, you should check punctuation after the opening remark. The information is clear the writing.
Also, I consider that you has had a great opinion about this social problem in our young people.
Good, Jina Fernanda
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